Chữa bài Nói chủ đề công nghệ

IELTS SPEAKING: TECHNOLOGY
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- Which household appliances do you think people need most?
Student's Answer: I think refrigerator is the household appliance that people need most because it makes our life easier and helps us eat fresh food. People usually put food, water and cooked food there. Refrigerator can also preserve food, meat, fruit, vegetable,… for a long time.
=> SUGGESTION: I suppose refrigerator is the most necessary stuff in each family because it makes our life easier and helps us eat fresh food. People usually put water, fresh food, and cooked food there to use later. Refrigerator can preserve meat, fruits, and vegetables, so on for a long time.
- How important is technology in education?
Student's Answer: I think technology is very improtant in education because it provides an engaging learning experience for students and it helps learners learn new skills and acquire new knowledge. For instance, projector helps the lessons to be presented easier for students to understand.
=> SUGGESTION: I think technology is very important in education for some main reasons. First, it provides an engaging learning experience for students in a lively virtual world. Second, it helps people learn new skills through various useful videos shared online. Last, thanks to technological devices such as projectors, students can acquire new knowledge in a stunning visual way for easier understanding.
- What are the disadvantages of modern technology?
Student's Answer: Sometimes, modern technology makes people hard to concentrate on their work and it also makes people become too rely on it. For instance, some students usually play games, watch Youtube, Facebook, short videos on Tiktok,… too much and then they for to do some works that they have to do like do the assignments, learn some new vocabularies,….
=> SUGGESTION: Besides many great benefits, modern technology can cause several serious drawbacks to users. To be more precise, it sometimes makes people hard to concentrate on their work and then rely too heavily on it. For instance, some students usually play games, watch Youtube, surf Facebook, or enjoy short videos on Tiktok too much, which makes them lack time do their assignments or enrich new vocabulary.
- Do you think we rely too much on modern technology?
Student's Answer: Yes, I believe we depend heavily on high-tech products in many aspects of life because it helps our works or studies become smooth and easier to do. For instance, every day I have to use my phone to find some informations that helps me easier to do my assignments or study online.
=> SUGGESTION: Yes, I believe we depend heavily on high-tech products in many aspects of life because of its conveniences and flexibility. It makes more sense that when using AI gadgets, we can work or study more effectively. For instance, every day I have to use my phone to find some information to do my homework or discover new things in the world.